Choosing a road name in American civil war era Virginia
Selecting a name for a road or street in Virginia during the American civil war created a pretty interesting problem….
The hold part 3
The story so far. Hans Werner, a Union secret service agent, is more-or-less trapped in the hold of a British…
Writing description by using an image in your word processor
This is a pretty good system for writing description if you’re trying to describe something but aren’t quite sure what…
Writing character description: introducing a character by name
This is a pretty good way of writing character description, or more specifically introducing a character by name. I call…
Writing description: the Confederate Secret Service
I’ve encountered a problem when describing the Confederate Secret Service in the American Civil War novel which I’m writing. I’m…
The Hold part 2
Captain Bowen decided that he had punished the Union agent who was imprisoned in the hold of his ship…
The Hold
Captain Samuel Bowen, master of the schooner ‘Harbinger,’ moved across the deck and opened a door which revealed a flight…
Writing description: Yankee or Union?
It’s interesting how description can determine what a character is like, what his attitude is, as I discovered when I…
Writing description versus action
I’m not quite sure whether I’ve written too much description in this scene from a novel which I’m writing; maybe…
A long and winding gently curving way of writing description
‘Long winding’ staircase or ‘gently curving’ staircase or both? Or don’t bother to describe it? As in: ‘The two doctors…